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1. Word formatting and highlighting headings properly in  the report.

2. Corrections in Acknowledgement

3. Remove the figures copied from internet OR cite the source of the images under each figure.
  (Appendix – A, B and C)

4. Where is your work  or Conceptual model of  “Incident Response Framework”
  4.1You are just talking of incident response frmamework..But what it is..
  4.2  what are its parameters…
  4.3 pic of Conceptual model of incident response framework
4.4 summary on Literature study of similiar models done in the past by other authors (In the form of a table)

5. Experimental analysis and Validation
5.1 Describe – what aspects of incident response framework the organizations had implemented.
5.2 How  similiar or better is your proposed incident response framework conceptual model  that you are proposing  in this work.

6. Details of project implementation
6.1 Details of the implementation like snapshots / pics of tool execution / graphs / tables generated by tools like log management and log analysis, intrusion detection schemes, NetFlow analyzers, and vulnerability scanners
6.2 Please show evidence through your observations on  your work.

7. Experimental Analysis
7.1 How did you decide the sample size.
7.2  Instead of just writing percentage include some data analysis statistics that reflect actual result analysis.

8. Analysis of overall result through comparison/validation/verification
  8.1  What kind of alerts and detection did the incident response framework give and how?
8.2 details like graphs / screen  snapshot / reports generated from tools etc.  to show evidence is missing.

9. Observations and Key findings
9.1 All contents mentioned here actually should be included in  literature review. (Because it is other author’s work)
9.2 Here you have to highlight what was your research findings  and contribution in this study based on what you have mentioned above.

10. Please remember this is a master’s research project and the report should reflect atleast the minimum standards expected from this work.

11. Formatting of references be done properly (Refer ACM / IEEE style)

12. The plagiarism report is attached. It is showing 22%. It should be less than 10% – 12%.
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Please do the corrections and send the updated report back to me immediately.